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  • ann mari cris aschieri 19/01/2019 21:11

    Che bella lavandaia, certamente meglio di una lavatrice!
    (Inteso dal tuo punto di vista ...)
    Io vado con la washing machine, ma niente fotografie :)
    Mi piace il contrasto del bianco candido sullo sfondo scuro.
    Bravo!
    • Shaun Stubley 19/01/2019 23:32

      Ahahaha....ma ci sono lavatrici belle esteticamente sul mercato. OK, sempre meglio la lavandaia. La washing machine? Niente foto? Peccato!!!!
  • Matthias Moritz 13/01/2019 16:41

    Again you put a beautiful model into a creative scene.

    However, I´ d like to suggest another angle: one or two steps to the right to get a consequent and more detailed view on the line and to reduce a portion of the grey background, which does not deliver much information to the viewer, but accounts for more than a third of the picture.
    In my imagination you would also achieve an improved Golden Ratio with an even more eye-catching impact on the photo.
    • Shaun Stubley 14/01/2019 19:12

      Hi Matthias. Thanks for your observations. I didn't want to give too much detail to the washing line which I thought would detract attention from the model. Yes, there perhaps is too much of the wall in the frame but I liked the texture it created and felt that it enhanced the overall "vintage feel". (Only my thoughts of course!) Thanks again! Shaun
    • Matthias Moritz 15/01/2019 10:02

      Thank you very much for your response and for sharing your thoughts! I considered your explanation :-) And you are right, a more dominant line maybe a distraction for the viewer.
    • Shaun Stubley 15/01/2019 18:33

      Thank you Matthias for your valuable feedback! I'm always grateful to receive your comments! All the best, Shaun
  • Prisma-photo 13/01/2019 8:49

    A great creation and perfect post-treatment !
    An inspired pose of your model, and such a strong eye-contact :-)
    I would maybe have cropped a bit more from the out of focus foreground on the left. What about a square format ?
    Regards,
    Prisma
    • Shaun Stubley 13/01/2019 9:23

      Good morning Prisma! Thanks very much! Yes, I think a square format would have worked well but I liked the texture of the wall so decided to keep it in the frame. Best regards, Shaun