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Karol Mach

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Karol Mach wishes constructive feedback for this photo. Please help by giving tips on image composition, technique, imagery, etc. (always be friendly and respectful)

noblog 10/02/2024 20:46
Bild einer Ausstellung !
Sehr gut so in S/W !
LG Norbert
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David Arduini 31/01/2024 0:15
Hi Karol thank you for your response to my photo. IT says you are a beginner; you definitely look much more advanced than that. But if you would like any constructive critism I'll try. As far as this photo I think the lighting and composition are good. Maybe if the people and Umbrella were lit up a little it would have given it a more 3-dimensional look. Because I grew up studying cinema and psychological movies, Alfred Hitchcock, etc. If everything was black except the top left window with the three people in it, I think it would force the viewer to feel like they were in a dream sequence. It would pull the viewer into another world, as happens to young children before they learn what is possible, I have always been able to access the dream world because mainstream is not my thing. That is why I like nature.
You have a very good eye, cheers david
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sieg.spindler 01/10/2023 14:58
Die Kontraste gefallen besonders!
LG Siegi
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Peter Meerdink 01/05/2023 15:45
Eine Rahmenerzählung mit schönen Kontrasten !
LG Peter M
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alexander stefanatos 05/03/2023 11:07
Excellent cadre!
friendly alexander
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Wolfgang der Lustige 14/02/2023 19:38
Super SW Bearbeitung. Gefällt mir sehr. LG Wolfgang
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PeterR.59 14/02/2023 16:56
Eine sehr schöne s/w Aufnahme. Insbesondere die Personen im Fenster gefallen mir sehr gut. VG, Peter
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Norbert G. Grassler 14/02/2023 16:22
Sehr gute Lichtstudie, Kontrastreich in SW dargestellt.
LG Norbert
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