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Oliver Suhr 26/08/2007 23:54
another editing by myself10a
Oliver Suhraw masry 24/08/2007 15:02
Beautiful scene with nice angle !!Best regards - aw masry
Oliver Suhr 23/08/2007 10:37
@ all,Thanks a lot for ideas, work and input!
cheers, Olli
Alexandra Baltog 22/08/2007 13:08
;-) this is my suggestion...You can see the warm afternoon light..and I think the b&w versions are not so good here. This place has a lot of details which could disappear in that editing try...
Cheers,
Alex
Dragos Ion 22/08/2007 10:51
Next time , put the camera on the ground. You will see something more dynamic and avoid a boring perspective.Regards ,
Dragos
Dave Donaldson 18/08/2007 2:13
My interpretation.....Andy Pomplun 17/08/2007 23:36
as Martin, would really like to blend out a lot of things going on in this scene, so I just tried blending it all out a bit by giving an "antique" touch... :))Oli Contest
Andy Pomplunusing the existing overexposion by even exagerating it....
Matthias Moritz 17/08/2007 22:15
Wow, I just had some of the ideas Martin offered:workshop by Olli
Matthias MoritzMartin Unger 17/08/2007 22:06
Yes, it's overexposed and asks for some editing...But the real problem is in my opinion that there is so much going on, the poster (which by the way is the only clear "eye-contakt"), the girl sitting on the floor, the man waiting. The 2 backpackers in the middle are not clear enough, so they make just for an additional element.
But: all that is going on in the left side of the picture, and that's resulting in a difficult imbalance. There's "nothing" on the right...
As you asked I tried a version in b/w, cropping away a little part from the right and from top.
Converting to b/w with gradient map, then working with different layers with curves, and adding just a hint of sepia... Well, all that was now done a little bit in a hurry...
Shi Bi De 17/08/2007 21:20
iii - OliverDas Bild ist massiv überstrahlt und deshalb viel zu hell.
Sorry, so wirkts nicht :-(
Grüsse
Peter