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Make-over

Make-over of a beautiful young woman who is sicncerely ill.

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martinvandongenfotografie wishes constructive feedback for this photo. Please help by giving tips on image composition, technique, imagery, etc. (always be friendly and respectful)
  • dolphin-e 29/11/2019 22:30

    Martin, in my opinion, the face of model is too mutch covered with hair. Tilting the head and looking down would make this image more justified. 
    Regarding your logo appears, as Matthias said, it is a little bit too dominant. And he is right. 
    Have a nice week end. 
    Best regards, 
    Sergey.
  • Matthias Moritz 25/03/2019 9:56

    A fine portrait. Eye-catching.

    However, in my opinion your logo appears a little bit too dominant.

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Camera NIKON D810
Lens 85.0 mm f/1.4
Aperture 9
Exposure time 1/250
Focus length 85.0 mm
ISO 320

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