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Kate Fedorova


Free Account, Saint Petersburg

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Kate Fedorova wishes constructive feedback for this photo. Please help by giving tips on image composition, technique, imagery, etc. (always be friendly and respectful)
  • Matthias Moritz 07/03/2020 9:57

    I go with @dolphin-e  .
     I´d try to crop the photo, but would try a square format and get the person into the first third (Golden Ratio)
  • J Oscar Sierra Echo 06/03/2020 16:39

    On target by Dolphine, great shot.
    Greetings.
  • dolphin-e 06/03/2020 16:34

    Katya, privet! This composition has everything to show the main idea. The curved figure of the old woman and the oversized broken shadows, as well as these horizontal lines at the bottom of the picture, which give the frame dynamics, all this works to achieve the desired result. Bravo! 
    P.S. In my opinion, the upper part of the plot is somewhat superfluous, you can crop it to a size of 20x25, and this will further enhance the emphasis.

    Have a happy holiday!. Warm regards,
    Sergey.

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Camera PENTAX KP
Lens smc PENTAX-DA 35mm F2.4 AL
Aperture 5.6
Exposure time 1/640
Focus length 35.0 mm
ISO 400

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