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Dear bitterchocolate, (I am writing in english because your profile shows your german isn't so good)
Allow me to criticize your picture. - Don't get me wrong : Nobody expects you to deliver 1st grade photography from the beginning but this picture has very many things which could be done much better :
- You have light coming from behind you. This makes your face even darker than it is. Maybe a little bit of flash might have helped.
- You are standing right next to a shelf whichs screw holes can be seen on the left part of the image. You can also see other distracting things in there. Not very nice :-) You should be the main target of the viewer's eye.
- The image is full of noise. I guess that is due to the light behind you. Try a different setup.
- The image is also very blurry (not sharp). Try a quicker shutter release (at least 1/60).
@Andreas: Vielleicht betrachtet sie ja jemand als sein "Goldstück" oder "Juwel"? ...aber dann wäre es wohl kein Selbstportrait ;)
Aber Spaß beiseite, ich denke aus Gold, Silber, Juwelen und dunkler Hautfarbe kann man, auf Grund des Farbkontrastes deutlich mehr machen!!
Auf gehts bitter... ;)
Suraka 01/10/2012 10:00
Dear bitterchocolate, (I am writing in english because your profile shows your german isn't so good)Allow me to criticize your picture. - Don't get me wrong : Nobody expects you to deliver 1st grade photography from the beginning but this picture has very many things which could be done much better :
- You have light coming from behind you. This makes your face even darker than it is. Maybe a little bit of flash might have helped.
- You are standing right next to a shelf whichs screw holes can be seen on the left part of the image. You can also see other distracting things in there. Not very nice :-) You should be the main target of the viewer's eye.
- The image is full of noise. I guess that is due to the light behind you. Try a different setup.
- The image is also very blurry (not sharp). Try a quicker shutter release (at least 1/60).
Peter Ruhm 02/09/2012 13:34
@Andreas: Vielleicht betrachtet sie ja jemand als sein "Goldstück" oder "Juwel"? ...aber dann wäre es wohl kein Selbstportrait ;)Aber Spaß beiseite, ich denke aus Gold, Silber, Juwelen und dunkler Hautfarbe kann man, auf Grund des Farbkontrastes deutlich mehr machen!!
Auf gehts bitter... ;)
BRIEM-PHOTOGRAPHY 14/07/2012 15:10
niceRautzenberg 04/07/2012 17:56
Tolles Foto, nettes Model ! Vg.MichaelAndreas Florian 04/07/2012 15:12
Warum in Sektion Gold und Juwelen?