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Blütenzauber

Bitte schreiben Sie mir ihren Eindruck. Was ist nicht gut, was kann man wie besser machen?
Please write something about your impression of this picture. What is not good, what can I do better?

Comments 16

  • Natur RB 16/02/2013 11:10 Voting comment

    Contra
  • Luca Di Muzio 16/02/2013 11:10 Voting comment

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  • Nuria Zortém 16/02/2013 11:10 Voting comment

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  • Valfoto 16/02/2013 11:10 Voting comment

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  • claudine capello 16/02/2013 11:10 Voting comment

    pro++++++++++
  • Alamos 16/02/2013 11:10 Voting comment

    Thank you
  • Silvana W. 16/02/2013 11:10 Voting comment

    Completely agree with Ken......regards
  • Peter Mertz 16/02/2013 11:10 Voting comment

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  • Bernd Schmidt2 16/02/2013 11:10 Voting comment

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  • Alamos 16/02/2013 11:10 Voting comment

    Thank you very much for your comment....I know that I am not good in photographie (and English) but I learn....one way to learn are the comments like yours. Thank you
  • Ken Piros 16/02/2013 11:10 Voting comment

    Flower images to make the gallery really have to have a tight control of sharpness and blurred DOF. In this image the DOF is controlled nicely and the blurred background allows the main focal point to be on the flower as it should. The issue is that the flower is not very sharp.

    I went to your homepage and looked at the EXIF data on this shot and what I have learned the hard way from some of my mistakes is that even though your lens has f2.8 capabilities and will give you that nice smooth blurred background it can be hard to control the sharpness of the main subject. It seems like the top pedal here has some sharpness to it but the flower center and surrounding pedals are blurry, changing your f stop from f2.8 to f4 will allow the flower to be sharper throughtout and still give you a good blur in the background.

    Now it also depends on your intent, which I could not get from your EXIF data, if you only wanted part of the flower to be sharp and the rest blurry like the background then you should have focused on the center of the flower and had that sharp and all the surrounding pedals blurry.

    You have the concept down very well you just need to refine it a little.

    Hope this helps.
  • Bernard.Backpacker 16/02/2013 11:10 Voting comment

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  • KLAAS H 16/02/2013 11:10 Voting comment

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  • Anita Jarzombek-Krauledies 31/01/2013 22:06

    Aus einer sehr guten Perspektive festgehalten. Klasse ist auch der Schärfeverlauf!
    Viele Grüße Anita
  • Alamos 19/01/2013 14:26

    Thank you

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Camera Canon EOS 5D Mark II
Lens Canon EF 24-70mm f/2.8L
Aperture 2.8
Exposure time 1/400
Focus length 70.0 mm
ISO 100

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