Ray Steinberg 01/02/2009 20:26
Nice eye contact, but there are too many distractions in the photo, that pull the viewer's eye away from you.
The bottom right side of the photo...too light.... too many lines....cover it up with the rest of the red sheet.
The left side....too much white, it distracts.
Your legs should be sharper, not out of focus. Placed at a different angle, to show the length.
Wearing a pair of high heels, wouldn't hurt either, it's a bedroom scene, you want to make it look as sexy as possible !!!! You want to make it look like the viewer wants to jump right into bed, along side you.!!!! ;-)
At least, that's what I'd do if I were shooting the scene.