Sweetness of a rainy day
Outside was so cludy, was raining but inside the room I took the photo was fine, cause I was eating strawberries, then the idea came up very easily, why should not take few photos of these beauties!?! ;)
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Thomas. Kistler 13/02/2007 23:36
Very nice capture! It looks very tasty and sexy! Nice composition, angle, color and clearnes.Good work. I like this kind of experimential shot. Well done! :-)
Best regardds!
Thomas
Cristina Dirnea 10/07/2006 11:20
Wow Jaime u make me to be very proud of my work! :)Thank you all for ur comments!
Sincerely,
CRis
Jaime Crystal Attenborough 10/07/2006 9:02
yummy photo.,nicely taken and the sharpness and colours are wonderful
well done
i will always keep an eye out on your great work
jaime :)
Milan Milenkovic 09/07/2006 21:37
I like everything in this picture, the color, frame, compozition. In mine opinion it's very nice photo.keep up the good work...
Peter Kis kalóz 27/06/2006 7:01
Very nice , appetizing shot!:)Regards, Peter
Detlef Klahm 18/06/2006 17:07
I am with Robert and Mark as well. I do like the presentaion as it draws my eyes to the colour of the strawberries.keep it up !
from Vancouver Canada
Cristina Dirnea 13/06/2006 11:10
Thank you all for being so kind, and took from ur time and added a helpful comment for me, here!Robert Riley 12/06/2006 8:41
Robert and Mark have said it, excellent shot, my only comment would be, apart from what has been said, to remove the outer frame, it doesnt need it.Dominique Duriot 09/06/2006 15:30
I'm new member and new "photograph"It's good to see some advise from others!!
Anyway it looks very good
Domi
Cristina Dirnea 09/06/2006 10:08
Thank you guys for ur comment, are really, really helpful and I agree.I do need critiques, not only comments cause I want so much to improve myself.Wish you all my best!
Sincerelly,
Cris
MWPhoto 08/06/2006 20:10
Hi Cristina, and welcome.My comments are the same as Roberts: needs more space to the right. Also it seems to me that you may as well keep all of the leaves in focus on that right berry, the back side ones are not focused. That may not be possible using the macro setting on your camera. If using the manual settings you would want to increase the f number (smaller aperture). I see from your profile that you are interested in getting a DSLR camera, which will give you more control over such things. Best wishes!
Robert van der Sanden 08/06/2006 19:34
Hi Cristina,welcome to fc. Good to see you here. Made a good start with this picture.
You requested some critique to this picture in the forum. Let me say, I have a hard time finding any. Just a few minor things come to my mind.
I like the idea of taking a bite out of one of the strawberries. That gives a point of interest in this composition. You kept it simple, which is good. The inner framing fits to that simplicity. The outer framing is not really my taste although I can see why you did it; probably to simulate a metal frame.
I would add a little bit of extra background at the top and the right side to give that strawberry a bit more space.
Good work, keep going...
Robert
Cees Kuijs 08/06/2006 10:44
Very tasty picture. The water is running trough my mouth. Like the presentation.Greetings, Cees