Mark Johnston 04/16/2007 3:31Could be just me but I feel it could do with a little more clarity, doesn't look too sharp to me. I really like the pose but feel the composition could do with some work. A lot of wasted space around the model while her left arm is cropped extremely tight. Maybe zooming in a little tighter. I also like the angle of the light but feel that some could be bounced back in to fill the hard shadow under her jaw and nose.