Fleeing Zebras
Any suggestions on how to improve the composition of this photo would be greatly appreciated.
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Veronikaa Ahlin 02/02/2007 19:39
What a lovley photo!! I really like it!It's "speed" (if you know what i mean) in the photo!
The Zebras are beautiful!!
Veronika Ahlin
Katarína Herdová 27/01/2007 19:58
You have a lot of beautiful cances an a very interestig photos.Kate.
Alexandra Baltog 08/01/2007 12:45
the right side zebra is cut off...but it is an instant pic, without any directions or prelucrations... a good one!this is a very natural pic!
Jaime Crystal Attenborough 08/01/2007 11:27
Hmmm.....Most of your photos are such a wonder to look at.This image looks a bit off balance with the Zebra on the right cropped off ,i would totally clone out the last Zebra, so you have the 4, and maybee crop it in a bit more to fill the frame , hope i sort of helped, cant wait to photograph some Zebras.
i would also love to know how it ended?
they look like they got away :0)
J :0)
Alfred Spectrum 08/01/2007 5:03
As for the composition, I think that indeed the zebra on the right could have improved the shot if he had been entirely visible, as probably he must have some fear in his "expression". Otherwise composition looks good to me. Colors look nice also. A pity the crock is still in the water, and a surprise that the first zebra is still somewhat unmoved while the others scamper for their lives. How did it end?Tamara Trejo 07/01/2007 19:38
So so TTLuc Grollie 07/01/2007 18:25
if that's a croc on the left in the water who scared them, you can't crop him off. Perhaps if you crop on the rightside just beside the zebra's buttock.....otherwise : a great actionshot !!!!!
greetz,
Pascal Viyer 07/01/2007 17:56
A great photo, beetwen reportage and natural shot !LOVE
pv
Jacky Kobelt 07/01/2007 17:27
a fantastic shot and a beautiful scenery, nice light and atmosphere. For some people it might be a bit a piity, that the Zebra at the right side is cut off - due to my opinion, this makes the picture dynamic and authentic...compliments
Jacky
Chantal van vliet 07/01/2007 17:25
I like this one...i can see the emotions of these zebras!
You can see they are scared of something
wel done!
regrds