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Jim McKinniss

Pro Member, Orcutt

Abstract No 3

This is from a scene I saw on the reverse side of a real estate for sale sign.

Canon 1DS Mark II. f2.8, 1/160 second, ISO 400, 21.0 mm focal length of a 16-35 mm zoom

Comments 3

  • Konstantinos Papazoglou 02/08/2007 11:32

    Obviously Sarah has drunk a bit of this "Lucidity Portion" to make such an analysis, I would simply call it nice and sympathetic attempt to present something different.
  • Sarah D. Kiefer 02/08/2007 9:28

    now that's one (...well two, but you know...) sharp eye you've got, jim! it's a beautiful mess. i think this would work even better with some attention to its presentation that enhances the complex and complete tonal range. the right looks unbalanced...bigger, fewer visible's likely a result of the layering, so it might serve the overall impact to spend some time with that layer, that or adjust the three so there's a more prominent gradient difference. i can see how you've arranged these to increase in size from left to right. the large whiter form in the right panel looks cloudy vis a vis the other two which have wonderfully grungy grit. excellent concept...very well-seen!!
    sarah k
  • Hannes Kapp 02/08/2007 8:20

    Fine *.*