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Am I on the right track? by Kombizz (Kambiz) Kashani

Am I on the right track?


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Kombizz (Kambiz) Kashani

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12.04.2007 at 10:34h, License: All pictures © by the senders.
Where Do You Think You Will Be?


I am sitting on a mountain.
I am casting shadows into the sky.

I did not invite it but the sun has come
And is now playing tag with my feet.

I am whispering to clouds today,
“Watch out for my shoulders,”

For I wish no harm
To all my soft friends.

Where do you think you will Be
When God reveals Himself
Inside of you?

I was so glad to hear
That every pillow in this world
Will become stuffed with
My soul and beard.

I am sitting on a mountain range.
I am a precious body of living water
Offered to the earth
From Light’s own hands.

Why ever talk of miracles
When you are destined to become
Infinite love.

Still, the Final Grace was left:
For all of existence and Hafez to blend
And to find that I am every pillow
Offering comfort

To each mind and
Foot.

- Hafez

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John Bennett, 12.04.2007 at 20:59h

Very colourful and good texture.
Greetings John.


Antonio Amen, 14.04.2007 at 17:06h

Nice textures
Greetings
António.


Chip Johansen, 17.04.2007 at 13:38h

The composition is ok, but the over saturation detracts very much from the image and is not pleasing.


Alberto Peroni, 18.04.2007 at 9:55h

I like the cut and also very much the choiche of over coloring the image


Luca Picciau, 21.04.2007 at 11:12h

I like the textures in this one!
Regards, Luca.


Lino Rusciano, 22.04.2007 at 16:02h

ottima composizione di forme e colori ......lino


Alice R., 23.04.2007 at 12:55h

You have some brilliant shots in your portfolio.
I chose this one as my fav!
Thanks for your comment.

Alice


John Barnett, 26.04.2007 at 7:40h

Well done!


Sergio Pessolano, 7.05.2007 at 11:13h

Very refined work.


Dragomir Vukovic, 10.05.2007 at 2:21h

yes, you are


Seraphine Wilhelm, 13.05.2007 at 0:05h

i believe u are on the right track :)
best,
S


Tanya Fedorova, 15.05.2007 at 23:10h

Beautiful...


Francesco Margarita, 14.06.2007 at 20:37h

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Susi Lawson Susi, 17.06.2007 at 8:24h

love the poem and the image!


aw masry , 24.06.2007 at 22:18h

Nice work. Well done.
Salam - aw masry


Mircea Tiron-Tudor, 2.07.2007 at 7:45h

Good colours and texture !


Jose Antonio Andres, 4.07.2007 at 11:53h

muy buena fotografía, gran impacto.


Iedu Alexandru , 24.07.2007 at 5:21h

Hello,
Lovelly photo, beautiful red tone, really beautiful concept !!!
Regards,
Alex



Eugenia Righi , 15.08.2007 at 13:38h

una elaborazione veramente accattivante!
bravo!
Eugenia


Jay~Jay , 18.05.2008 at 11:25h

Very nice..!!

Greets from Berlin


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