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Poster - WE NEED YOUR HELP! by Armin Ates

Poster - WE NEED YOUR HELP!


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7.11.2007 at 19:07h, License: All pictures © by the senders.
Hi guys!

we, the fotocommunity team, need your help! We want to hang this poster here to the pin boards of British universities in order to introduce fotocommunity to young and creative hobby photographers. Now we would like your feedback. Please write us your opinion about the poster and the slogan in a brief comment. Is it good enough? Do you have any better
ideas for a text?

many thanks and kind greetings from the fotocommunity team!

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Detlef Klahm, 8.11.2007 at 5:50h

the simplicity of this image makes a direct statement to the art!
...Wonderful Job !


Peter. Gau , 9.11.2007 at 15:49h

the photo is great!!

regarding the text i would write:

"How would you photograph feelings?"
I also would loose the text (fotocommunity) in the picture, leave the e mail adress and write then: The international photo community. Change f into ph.


Christian Dargel CD , 9.11.2007 at 18:04h

Hallo
klasse Arbeit sieht gut aus ,hast du super Dargestellt !Gibt Gold !
lg CD


KasiaD , 10.11.2007 at 9:49h

I like it very much but agree with Peter.Gau.
In English it sounds very stiff and formal to use the "one" form. Having gone through a few formulations I think I'd react best to the following if I saw this emotive poster:
"How would
you
capture a feeling?"

Graphically, the uncentered "a" in the title looks a little weird unless there is another uncentered text to make it look like a deliberate move.

I also would take the fc logo out of the shot. It is a really simple, emotive work and the logo clutters it, especially as the next line contains the URL anyway:
I would move the logo down to the next section with a hidden link to the URL and center it just like the following text. The link is featured anyway many times in the sections at the bottom.
Looking forward to seeing the final poster. Good luck.
Kathryn




Michael Lunse, 12.11.2007 at 0:28h

Title I would suggest:
How do you photograph a feeling?

Then below the picture (good picture by the way) I would do the fotocommunity logo ending with .com (fotocommunity.com) - the www is redundant now for Ithe MS Internet Explorer web browser. I would then kill the line www.fotocommunity.com

Between the current fotocommunity logo in the picture, www.fotocommunity.com just below the picture, and then "The international photo community" below that it is too, too busy and repetitive. Yes I would spell foto in it's proper form of photo.


Maria Mylona, 12.11.2007 at 20:07h

I do agree with all previous comments. An idea about the place of the logo would be to put it on the upper right hand of the image? It would seem like she is "looking" at the "foto"community.. Well of course then the sketch on the wall would not be totally seen. But in where the logo is know is not the best place. Just move it a bit around. Just my thought!
Good luck.Maria


Andy Pomplun, 13.11.2007 at 0:52h

I would mostly agree with Michael's suggestion, "how do you photograph a feeling?" sounds very good after all, and yes, I think we could leave the www ..... ;)


Kenny Jazz, 13.11.2007 at 12:17h

I wrote message in forum topic:)


Armin Ates, 14.11.2007 at 16:27h

__________________________________________________________________________
hi!
today we discussed all your input. your given feedback was very important to us.
we discussed a lot of pro´s and con´s - here is the final result:
final result by Armin Ates
final resultnot being discussed
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14.11.07, 16:14

there won´t be too much modifications as you can see, but the ones made are quite important.

slogan is changed, typo is changed (the a), international PHoto community spelled correctly.

btw, the french version of this poster, which looks quite similar, is distributed already and works out quite well.

THANK YOU SO MUCH!
armin


Der Brownz - Peter Braunschmid, 29.11.2007 at 10:39h

wenn ihr sowas mal auch für ösien macht, sagt mirs ;)


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