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we, the fotocommunity team, need your help! We want to hang this poster here to the pin boards of British universities in order to introduce fotocommunity to young and creative hobby photographers. Now we would like your feedback. Please write us your opinion about the poster and the slogan in a brief comment. Is it good enough? Do you have any better
ideas for a text?
many thanks and kind greetings from the fotocommunity team!
I like it very much but agree with Peter.Gau.
In English it sounds very stiff and formal to use the "one" form. Having gone through a few formulations I think I'd react best to the following if I saw this emotive poster:
capture a feeling?"
Graphically, the uncentered "a" in the title looks a little weird unless there is another uncentered text to make it look like a deliberate move.
I also would take the fc logo out of the shot. It is a really simple, emotive work and the logo clutters it, especially as the next line contains the URL anyway:
I would move the logo down to the next section with a hidden link to the URL and center it just like the following text. The link is featured anyway many times in the sections at the bottom.
Looking forward to seeing the final poster. Good luck.
Title I would suggest:
How do you photograph a feeling?
Then below the picture (good picture by the way) I would do the fotocommunity logo ending with .com (fotocommunity.com) - the www is redundant now for Ithe MS Internet Explorer web browser. I would then kill the line www.fotocommunity.com
Between the current fotocommunity logo in the picture, www.fotocommunity.com just below the picture, and then "The international photo community" below that it is too, too busy and repetitive. Yes I would spell foto in it's proper form of photo.
I do agree with all previous comments. An idea about the place of the logo would be to put it on the upper right hand of the image? It would seem like she is "looking" at the "foto"community.. Well of course then the sketch on the wall would not be totally seen. But in where the logo is know is not the best place. Just move it a bit around. Just my thought!
today we discussed all your input. your given feedback was very important to us.
we discussed a lot of pro´s and con´s - here is the final result: